Problem Statement: The Graphic Design Department is in need of a calendar for the academic year 2013-2014. It will be shown in the new design gallery next year. Selected calendars will be shown at the Spring Show. Possibility it may be printed.
Create a Calendar with the following specifications:
- The calendar is going to be 4 panels of 11x17= 44x17
- It needs to include all the months, days of the week, the name, and dates.
- The type should be one of the three: Helvetica, Univers, or Futura.
- The calendar needs to demonstrate contrast, grayscale, utilize white space, and have non equal black to white ratios.
Working with the Grid
1st EDIT: Calendar Sketches
I drew out 15 sketches and made a matrix on the side that helped me with keeping my months, name, pictures, year and dates in a SML scale. I tried to keep in mind that the calendar we are designing is not actually supposed to look like a calendar. After going through my 15 sketches, I chose 2 and refined them. I emphasized pictures and made them different scales in my first one. In the second one, I took one month and highlighted it in big numbers and arranged the pictures differently as well as in different scales.
2nd EDIT: Calendar Sketches w/more contrast
My first sketches didn't emphasize strong contrast so I did a couple more and emphasized the months, Calendar, and the days of the week. After seeing Brooke's sketches in class, the definition of contrast became more clear to me. Out of everyone's sketches in the class, I only remembered her sketches because she had contrast. That's the goal of contrast. To catch the viewer's attention, and have that image retain in their mind.
Starting off this project, was a little bit difficult. How can I relate my type to the images that I have? It was hard to see the elements my pictures already had. So I began by defining my photos.
I sketched out my photos and first began by drawing out the lines and curves that I saw in my photos. I then sketched another set and filled in the white space I saw. Just by doing this, I was able to see the elements of my image. This goes back to the cheerio exercise from the beginning of class. When I got stuck on how to relate my type to the images I had, I began defining the elements (Lines, curves, whitespace) and I was able to see these components more clearly. I then began sketching out ideas on how I wanted to relate my type to the photos. What do my photos have? My photos have lines and circles. So I began using the Gestalt term Continuity for relating my type to my images. Besides relating my type to the lines and circles of my images, I could also relate it to the unit of white space in my photos.
Modular vs Radial
1st EDIT: 2 Contrasting Modular Grids
(Left) I realized I needed more black in my compositions so I made one of my modular compositions dark (the top left picture) and placed the letters of the month there. The letters took up two grid units, so I used those units to place the days and the pictures. My S,M,L hierarchy is emphasized in the composition. but I realized my white spaces were clunky. I then had to figure out a way to weave in the white space and get rid of the odd little shapes that it created. So instead of making my numbers in boxes, I made it the length of the months so it read as a texture and I placed the images and year on the bottom of the composition. After analyzing my revision, I realized my white spaces do look cleaner, but what relationship do they have to my calendar? Where am I taking the units from? This was the most challenging aspect for me--Staying within the grid, while maintaining S,M,L, visual hierarchy, having clean white spaces and establishing relationships within the composition.
(Right) I made this composition darker by making my type bolder and larger. I added a black line to increase the blackness of the composition, but after analyzing my composition as a whole, it looked very cluttered to me. Where does my eye go first? The months and "Calendar" were competing against eachother and again, my white spaces needed to be refined. For my revision, I made the white spaces relate to the pictures and made the days the unit of the pictures, but I was concentrating too hard on staying within the grid units. I needed to break free of the symmetrical layout and not have the content become so overwhelming.
2nd EDIT: Contrasting modular Grids
(Left) I increased the blackness even more in this composition and added contrast in the sizes of my photos by making one picture large, 3 medium, and 4 small. However, I realized the units of Calendar didn't actually match the units of my photos. Why? Because I was editing on the computer, and confused the text box with the actual text. So instead of making the text the unit of the photos, I was actually making the text box the unit instead. I still needed to work on my white space more and play around with activating white space. In the bottom composition, I fixed my units up and made Calendar the same units as my pictures and took out the small photos because I felt they had no relationship to my composition, unit wise.
(Right) My goal for this composition was to increase the whitespace. Instead of having the days read as boxes, I put them into a texture. I took the unit of white space between the year and texture and repeated it within my photos. Although I was slowly beginning to understand the concept of taking units in a composition and repeating it, I was straying from keeping my white spaces clean and simple. In my next revision, I played with interval of the white space and had it increase starting from "A" and increasing all the way to "R." However, my ratio of black to white began to equalize and I needed to come up with a way to increase my white space in a composition.
3rd EDIT: Choosing one modular grid & refining it
I chose to work with my composition that had the most black in it. "Keep it simple" was Gwen's words to me so I attempted to increase simplicity within my photos. On the left, I made my picture units the same as the days and made the white space between the photos relate to the units of the year. In the composition on the right, I made Calendar the same unit as the pictures as well as the days and months. This way, my white spaces flow evenly between the photos and type. The year is actually the same unit as the photos and I placed it in the corner to activate the white space in the center. I am pleased with my final revisions because my white spaces are not so clunky, I am able to see visual hierarchy/grayscale, and my elements have a stronger relationship to each other than before. It's about working with what you have, everything is already available for you to use, and in the beginning I was overlooking that concept and making the task much more difficult than it really was.
1st EDIT: Two contrasting Radial Grids
(Left) For this exercise, I decided to relate my pictures to one composition by having my days transition from light to dark. In the first composition, my days read as stripes, and there wasn't a strong enough transition from light to dark within my days. The years also read as an interruption and didn't flow with my composition because it was the only element that was reading vertical instead of horizontal. For my revision, I decided to flip the years so that they read horizontally instead of vertical, and I made my days a texture instead of reading as stripes. I also incorporated "Calendar" into the transition from light to dark so that it has a relationship to the composition instead of looking like it was just placed there. Looking back at my first composition, the stripes and the black square makes my composition appear to be too "boxy" and the texture in my second composition breaks free of that boxy look.
(Right) For my second radial composition, I decided to take the elements I already defined in my photos (See above: sketches defining lines/white space) and began emphasizing the gestalt term continuity from them. I wanted to keep my composition simple, and only have 2–3 interruptions. I chose to work with the half circle photo I have of a flower, and play with having the text as the white spaces in my photo. After analyzing my composition, I felt that my interruptions were too minimal and not greatly emphasized. I felt like there wasn't a strong focal point to catch the viewer's attention and started analyzing what else can I change to highlight an element in my composition.
2nd EDIT: Two contrasting Radial Grids
(Left) I decided to break up the texture of my composition and have the years become a unit of the pictures. I made "A" darker because the picture below it has some darkness in it. The unit of space between my photos came from the unit of the stem of the flower in my first photo. I still wasn't satisfied with my changes in my composition so I decided to sketch some different ways I could emphasize the transition from light to dark in my composition. For my revision, I decided to have my numbers small and have more white space between them to emphasize the lightness in weight. Then increase the blackness by enlarging by numbers and increasing the boldness of the numbers. However, by making these revisions, I ended up having two different concepts and they didn't look like they weaved together. I then needed to figure out a way to emphasize the lightness and darkness in a composition while still maintaining flow, and keeping the elements tied closely together instead of making them look like two very different forms.
(Right) I decided to stick with a radial interruption instead of having different lines and curves in my composition. Instead of having my days as boxes, like in my previous composition, I decided to make them a texture and have that texture interrupted by the circle. For my revision, I decided to place the texture along the bottom so that it ran parallel to my pictures and decided to incorporate the gestalt term closure by having my radial circle stop halfway, and then interrupt the texture with white space. I did the same to my radial circle for my flower photo. For calendar, I emphasized boldness in some of the numbers in my texture to create closure for that circle as well.
3rd EDIT: Choose one radial and refine it
For my final radial, I chose to edit my light to dark picture relationship composition because I felt it was unique and different form everyone else's radial composition in the class. I began working more on my white space while still maintaing grayscale hierarchy and flow. I then thought about putting "Calendar" within my images instead of separating them because I felt like they would emphasize more with the transition from light to dark.




























